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A DEADLY FATE (supernatural horror)

After playing poker with a deck of cards belonging
to an evil magician, several teens receive a
picture of how they will die within 24 hours,
forcing a detective to try and save the last
survivor from her deadly fate.


A FALSE REALITY (drama)

After living the perfect life in a comatose dream
world for ten years, a young man struggles to
accept a very different reality upon awakening,
one that includes ruthless gangsters out to kill
him and a daughter he has never known.


A LOST LOVE (drama)

A cheating, abusive married man suffering amnesia
must battle his past in order to give his family
a future.


APPARITION (psychological thriller)

A detective is the only one who can see a mysterious
apparition believed responsible for several local
murders.


A STRIKING SIMILARITY (drama)

A scientist’s whole world crumbles around him when
he clones a lost love, destroying the resulting
young girl’s life as well as his own due to
unrealistic expectations.


BIG GIRL (horror)

When a teen girl volunteers to do community service
for her very obese neighbor, she discovers that the
large woman has a raging appetite and an extreme
talent - for swallowing people whole.

CARNAGE IN TARA WOODS (supernatural horror)

The restless spirit of a young woman brutally
murdered years ago threatens a group of teens on
a weekend campout, forcing one member into stopping
the destruction before she becomes the next casualty.


COERCED (thriller)

In a sinister game of blackmail, a man forces his
estranged wife to commit a series of crimes in order
to keep her new boyfriend alive.


CONTORTED (drama)

A well known director gets more than he bargained
for when his estranged daughter's gorgeous friend
arrives on his doorstep and casts a web of seduction
that destroys his life.


DEAD AT SEA (supernatural thriller)

When fellow passengers on a luxury yacht mysteriously
vanish overnight, a woman is forced to confront her
murderous ex-boyfriend she believes is responsible
for the deaths, only she discovers that the many
tourists aren't the ones who really disappeared -


Deadly Hike (horror)

When four teens decide to hike a well-known trail,
they get more than they bargained for when they
come across a demented family who wants them to
stay in their home as permanent guests.

DEADLY RECONNECTION (thriller)

After a married woman decides to meet with an ex-
boyfriend she hasn't seen in years, all hell breaks
loose when he becomes obsessed with her and wants
to become the only man in her life.


DEAD WALKING (horror)

All hell breaks loose when a mind-altering virus
that causes its victims to ravenously crave flesh
runs rampant in a secluded area of woods and
infects a group of young adults on a weekend getaway.


DEMETRI THE COMMITTED (comedy)

When a man addicted to relationships bets his best
friend that he can stay away from commitment for
six months, he risks losing the woman of his dreams
when he can't confess his true feelings for her.


DON'T LET THE BEDBUGS BITE (horror)

A small town exterminator must pull out all the
stops when a new, deadly strain of bedbug terrorizes
the area.


DRUMMING IN THE DARK (drama)

When a promising percussionist in her high school
band loses her eyesight in a tragic accident, she
overcomes adversity to help an excellent college
drumline compete in the P.U. competition.

EMMA'S REPRIEVE (drama)

When an orphaned teen is forced tolive with the
bitter grandfather she never knew, each learns
to look at life through the other’s perspective.


FINNIGAN FARM (horror)

What starts out as an innocent 5 year reunion at
a remote farmhouse for a woman whose high school
boyfriend was killed in a senseless accident
turns deadly for the group responsible when a
killer sets out to avenge his death.


GRIMMERSON MANOR (horror)

When guests are stranded in a remote hotel during
a windstorm, they find themselves at the mercy
of an unknown killer determined to murder every
last soul before dawn.

HER FATHERS' BLESSINGS (comedy)

Ready to tie the knot with the woman he loves,
a man must overcome a hugehurdle in his way of
succeeding - getting the blessings of his
fiancee's four dads who greatly dislike him.


HOUSE OF DEMONS (horror)

A group of college students sent to a haunted
house for their paranormal class experience demons
first hand as they fight just to survive the
weekend.

HUNGERED (horror)

When a human-like creature wreaks havoc in a
small town by eating the organs of his victims,
a detective must race against the clock in order
to save his teen daughter and her friends from
becoming the next victims.


KILLER TRAILS (horror)

When a teen joins her detective father’s
investigation of a popular Halloween attraction
linked to several disappearances, they must work
together to stop a maniac and save each other
from becoming the next victim.


MANNESKIN (horror)

When a realistic mannequin turns up in a store’s
window, a group of teens are determined to
discover the secret of how it was made... or die
trying.


PHANTOM BUS 39 (supernatural horror)

When the restless spirits of five people who died
during a horrid bus crash take out their anger on
unsuspecting passengers, a detective must solve
the mystery in time to save his kids when they
unknowingly get on the phantom bus.


RELIVING THE PAST (drama)

A depressed mother of three is given the opportunity
to revisit her troubled teen years and right some
wrongs that affect the rest of her life, only the
decisions about what to change don’t come as easy
as she expected.


REPLICATE (sci-fi/horror)

A group of weekend campers is hunted by a visiting
alien capable of replicating anything it comes in
contact with, or anyone.

SLASHED (horror)

A small town is panicked when several teens are
brutally murdered and the investigation uncovers
a least likely suspect(s).


TERROR IN THE HILLS (horror)

When a demented hunter pursues four teens on a
camping trip, a set of twins must fight against
the maniac before they become the local store's
biggest selling item.


THE BOUQUET (romantic comedy)

A longtime family tradition of being the next
to marry after catching the bouquet goes astray
when a nerdy little girl accidentally catches
it, and none of her female relatives can marry
until she does - which will be a difficult feat
to accomplish.


THE CENTRAL HEIST (crime/drama)

A bumbling detective finds herself in the middle
of a bank robbery where she’s the only hope the
many hostages have to survive.


THE DORM CHRONICLES (comedy)

Six very different freshmen come together for a
laughable first year of college filled with
mayhem, pranks, drugs and love.


THE HOUSE ON BLOOD RIVER (horror)

A fun day of canoing goes awry for six teens when they
become lost and encounter two demented brothers looking
for female companionship.


THE OTHER DAUGHTER (thriller)

After trading their newly adopted daughter to the leader
of a Satanic cult in exchange for his resurrecting their
blood child from the dead, a couple must race to save the
first girl from a ceremonial sacrifice and battle a
powerful demon posing as the second.


THE PACT (comedy)

As a man prepares to marry the woman of his dreams,
he is forced to contend with a sex-addicted best
friend and a desperate woman he promised as a child
to marry after his 30th birthday.


THE ROAD TO SOMEWHERE (drama)

When a lonely truck driver takes a teen runaway
under his wing, the two learn a lot about life and
each other as the girl tries to hide from her
abusive step-father.



Shorts:


Death Message (thriller)

When blood appears on a woman's bedroom walls the
same time every night, she discovers that a murder
victim who use to live in her house is attempting
to warn her of a tragic history about to repeat
itself unless she takes measures to prevent it.
(15 pages)


Playtime (dramedy)

Two college bound preps make a decision that could
change their relationship, and lives, forever.
(4 pages)


The Secret (drama)

A wife has regrets after helping her sleeze of a
husband do something she knows is terribly wrong.
(4 pages)


Their Last Moments (drama)

A couple coping with the burial of their only child
makes a rash decision to take their own lives.
(3 pages)


Betrayed (drama)

A cheating husband believes he has the upper hand
until he meets up with his wife's lover. (3 pages)


Mid-Life Affair (drama)

A ride home in a cab proves valuable to a middle-
aged man having an affair when the driver makes
him see the error of his ways.


Stick `Em Up (drama)

When a man attempts to rob a cab driver, he has
a change of heart when the victim makes him
realize there are better choices for his life.


The Model Passenger (drama)

A distressed model gets more than she bargained
for on a cab ride home when the cabbie makes her
realize how shallow she really is.


A Dying Love (horror)

A woman recently separated from her abusive
husband finds herself in a hopeless situation
when her ex decides she can't go on with her
life without him in it.


A Psycho in Sheep's Clothing (thriller)

Expecting a call from a man her roommate set her
up with for a blind date, a young woman finds
herself talking on the phone to a psychopath she
believes to be her date, but discovers it's really
a man who has recently escaped an institution and
broken into her house with murder on his agenda.


Spook House (horror)

A prank in an old abandoned house goes awry when
the resident ghost decides to join in.


A Deadly Secret (mystery)

A disgruntled employee uses a deserted locker to
hide a deadly secret from his co-workers.


Fatal Destiny (thriller)

A mysterious locker owned by the devil himself
provides victims with everything their heart
desires, until they destroy their own life.

The Games They Play (drama)
When a buddingdirector's ambitions are crushed
by a manipulativeproducer, he finds himself
going to extremes justlike the main character
in his latest short film.


The Killer Clown (horror)
A woman is followed by a horrid clown that commits
brutal crimes and pins them on her. (30 pages)



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vickyn Marketing/writing tips Part 4 0 Aug 24 2009, 8:04 PM EDT by vickyn
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Actual marketing. Make sure to have at least a few low budget scripts available because you will not likely be able to get to the big guys when you're unknown. You will have to target small producers who are willing to read work from non-credited writers.

There are various web sites where low budget producers sometimes post ads for scripts - Done Deal, Craigslist, Rosa Ashley for a few. These will accept equeries. Keep your query short and to the point. Follow directions in the ad perfectly. You want to show up front that you are a professional in every way. Producers receive a lot of queries so it doesn't take much to run them away from yours. Give the producers the information they want as short as possible.

Eventually, the first option comes if you keep at it. You may have dreamned of the 6 figure deals we hear so much from Hollywood, but realistically, that isn't going to happen. You may not even see a 4 figure deal for a while. You may want theatrical release for your baby. It will likely go straight to DVD. I know writers who say it's theatrical or nothing. Well, they still have nothing. I know writers who say 6 figures or nothing. Yeah. They still have nothing. It's great to be paid for doing what you love to do, but don't be too greedy. Yes, you want to be paid for all of your hard work, but like with anything, it takes time to climb up the ladder to success.

If you keep selling scripts, you should make more doing so. You may get very little for your first sell, but you have to ask yourself which is more important - the money or the credit? Are you only writing screenplays to get rich, or are you writing them because you want to share your ideas with the world? The latter indicates a real screenwriter. Credits first, money second.

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Now you have a few scripts that you feel are ready. What do you do next? I think the next stage is to try a few contests. Even if you fail to place in any, don't give up. Try contests that have separate genres for competition. Some genres don't fare as well as others when all are competing together. If you get some placements, great. You can mention that in a query, but only briefly. No need for specifics about what contest unless you win. I have never won one, but placed third a few times.

The big contest amateur writers love to enter is Nicholl. I tried that one several times with numerous scripts and I think I am the only writer I know who never placed in it. Yet I have eleven options currently, a feature in production, two in pre-production, several short films, many contest placements, and I have completed numerous writing jobs for producers. So don't take non-placements as a sign that you aren't any good. Do take placements as a chance to build your confidence that someone loved your work and as a marketing tool.

If you place in a big contest like Nicholl, I hear you will have producers and agents contacting you to read your script. That's the best way to market when you have people knocking on your door. Unfortunately, people like me haven't had that advantage so I have had to do things the hard way.
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vickyn Marketing/writing tips Part 2 0 Aug 24 2009, 7:36 PM EDT by vickyn
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Also know that you can't take feedback too seriously. If you try to follow all advice given, you will be all over the place, chasing every suggestion given, finding that you end up undoing something you just did. Look at what the majority says. Also look at whom is giving the advice. If they are an advanced writer, they might have a better leg to stand on, but advice is subjective. Two professionals can disagree on one thing. You need to develop a gut feeling to tell what is the best thing for your scripts.

Now that you have finished one script and polished it, whether it be a short or a feature, write another, then another. Have at least a few ready before you start to seriously market your work. It's a good idea to write in a variety if genres and budgets if you can so your chances of having that right script at the right time will be better.

I would say horror is my main genre. There was a time I never would have believed I could even write a horror, but once I did and received favorable reactions from readers, I realized I could do it. More ideas started coming to me. I loved watching some of the better horrors so I understood them. I still wanted to do better, making my horrors more intelligent than the standard fare. I like to play around with the reader/audience, giving them false leads and sometimes using an ending that shocks people.

But I have also written studio fare in different genres. It is best not to limit yourself in any way. If you only write horror, you can't branch out even more into other markets. There are few genres I can't see myself writing. There are genres I never thought I could write, but I came up with a great concept and wrote it, or a producer has hired me to write something I didn't think I could. Learn to believe in yourself without being too cocky.
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